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18/11/2014 03:52:19

video567
video567
Posts: 97 		i know the song could lead to a copyright issue, this is going to change. my cousin actually wrote a song we are going to replace but this was the closest song i could use to test what i want to say. could use some feed back on the character movement it definitely needs work.

edited by video567 on 18/11/2014
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18/11/2014 12:21:24

DanimalMuvizu mogulExperimental user
Danimal
Posts: 477 		Character movement looked good except at the 24 second mark or so when it cuts to the wide shot and the guy is just sort of standing there. Also, the intro goes between black & white and color for reasons I can't determine. I do like the large city you built though.

And as much as I hate to disappoint you, you probably won't see me pee in my pants. Well, you might. I tend to do that anyway.

Looks good!
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18/11/2014 17:57:32

ziggy72Muvizu mogulExperimental user
ziggy72
Posts: 1988 		The city is my old Hipster Bebop Junkies set, and the main camera is defaulted to black & white, hence the colour change (v567, you need to Edit the camera properties and turn that off). I think you need to use far fewer actions, and use the Eye movements/Eye size to convey expression, rather than having his arms flapping about the whole time (it tends to be distracting). Less is more, especially if you want people to listen to the message rather than look at the movements. Good start though, look forward to seeing where you go with it

Oh, one thing, when he's about to go up the stairs you can see the edge of the set off to the right - there's nothing there, it's just an empty space. If you'd have rotated the camera around a little to the left, it would've looked better. Never show the edges if you don't have to! Big Grin
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18/11/2014 18:09:09

video567
video567
Posts: 97 		thank you! yes i am using Ziggy72's set for now. I wanted to see if my computer could handle a bigger set. I am in the process of making my own but i had an idea in mind and had to run with it before it escaped me. i do appreciate the feed back the goal of the walk in the street will be moved once my set is completed because i plan to use that as my walk in to the comedy stage building then walk into the stage. the eyes, i didnt even think about that, thank you Ziggy72 for that advice. the reason he stops at the steps is because when i walk up them he jumps to the top of the building but yes i will cut the camera on that stop or move it. thank you so much for the feed back. i have some of my old stand up routine i used to do but i have to record it and try to show the same emotion and style i did back then and i am having a hard time but one say ill get it right. thank you again
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19/11/2014 21:05:53

DanimalMuvizu mogulExperimental user
Danimal
Posts: 477 		ziggy72 wrote:
The city is my old Hipster Bebop Junkies set

Oh. Well in that case I do like the large city YOU built Blush
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20/11/2014 00:48:24

ziggy72Muvizu mogulExperimental user
ziggy72
Posts: 1988 		I wasn't trying to correct you Danimal (it's a 4 year old set after all) I just wanted to establish that I knew the set well. Thanks though
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